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Ah hah!
Starting a new series, oyes.
This one I wont be as serious about...sooo...it`ll be a side project xD
Comments are greatly appreciated, and I love to hear about what you all think will happen next....this one is pretty predictable ; )
Starting a new series, oyes.
This one I wont be as serious about...sooo...it`ll be a side project xD
Comments are greatly appreciated, and I love to hear about what you all think will happen next....this one is pretty predictable ; )
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this is amazing. you started it and ended it at perfect points. i love the details of lilykit's perspective. drama, tension, and despair are perfect and i think that this is wonderful. even without pictures, these are one of those stories that can be easily and perfectly visualized with detail. the originality? couldnt be better and i say that even though this isnt a drawing to grade the technique i still love your style. it impacts the reader in such a dramatic way and leaves you on the edge of your seat. if anybody reads this i bet they would be dying to know wt hppens next. there is also one thing that im not good at but you are great. i tend to add to much exciting stuff in ma stories and it just ends up with your brain huting and you asking yourself wat the hell just happened but yors is different. its wonderful and i cant wait to see what you do next!!!!!